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New_Consequence_9975
If I could eat only one good for the rest of my life, I'll choice dak-galbi. I have usually thought about this topic. And the answer allays was dak-galbi. The reason why I answer this is it is my overwhelming favorite food.

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sophisticaden_•
What is with a million posts all saying “Please check my sentences” this morning. Is there some kind of exam in Korea or something? Anyway: If I could eat only one ~~good~~ food for the rest of my live, ~~I’ll choice~~ I would choose dak-galbi. I have ~~usually thought about this topic~~ thought about this topic often, and the answer ~~always was dak-galbi~~ is always dak-galbi. The reason why I ~~answer~~ say this is **that** it is my ~~overwhelming~~ favorite food.
edgardave•
Probably not perfect but here are some ideas: If I had to choose only one dish for the rest of my life it would be dak-galbi. I have often thought about this question and the answer is always the same. The reason for this answer is that dak-galbi is overwhelmingly my favourite food. . If I could eat - if I had to choose. Changes it from a voluntary choice or a preference to only eat one thing to more of a theoretical question. 'If I could eat' suggests that you would like to only eat one dish forever. I'll choice - I would choose. A choice is one of multiple options, to choose is to pick one of the choices. Usually - often. Usually suggests 'in response' or 'in this situation'. 'I often' changes it to more sporadic but also more consistent. My overwhelming - overwhelmingly my. 'My overwhelming' suggests it is overwhelming you (too much, too strong etc.). 'Overwhelmingly my favourite' changes it so the decision is overwhelmed (over powered in favour of an obvious answer) rather than the person being overwhelmed (e.g. overpowered by the number of choices). Perhaps overwhelming could be replaced with 'easily' or 'by far' (by far, as in the horse won the race by far - by a long distance).
CaptainMalForever•
If I could eat only one thing for the rest of my life, I would choose dak-galbi. I have thought about this a lot, and the answer is always dak-galbi. It is my absolute favorite food.
defying-death•
“If i could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I would choose / it would definitely have to be dak-galbi. I have always thought about this topic (and what my answer would be if I were to be asked), and the answer has always been dak-galbi. My reasoning is that it’s my favourite food (probably some extra details needed on why it’s your favourite)