Judge my accent please

Obviously India. Every Indian English speaker who wants to sound less Indian needs to learn how to pronounce the plosives /p t k b d g/ in all phonetic environments.

India. I think the biggest giveaway is probably intonation.

Indian accent. I think that the pauses in your sentences make you sound sort of like the stereotyped “upper class bored” which might be why some people say you sound disinterested. While difficult if you try and out the pauses between the sentences it might aid in dispelling this perception. But overall you sound nice!